The half goodbye !!

The way he waved the last time ,

Kissed his wife,

Who was his LIFE ..

Gave a sweet peck on cheeks ,

I love you the most , Blushingly she speaks ,

And then he never returned back

Little did she know , he was brutally attacked

Recalling the last goodbye

She asks herself , WHYYYYY ??

The old parents grief ,

Out of utter disbelief

Innocent kids partially unaware of their surroundings ,

Stare blankly at their dad sleeping , with their hearts pounding …

The never ending pain of family stays for years ,

Inducing their mind with traumatic fears …

As I sit here ,

Reading stories on newspaper of longing terrorism ,

Which is not at all a form of heroism

I think ,

We all are composed of same blood ,

Children of the same mud ..

The division of this earth ,

Into narrow pieces of community and borders ,

The mindless actions of the most fearful , creating disastrous disorders …

They brutally end a life ….

A life is forever lost ,

The faith of countrymen is under deep frost !!

Who is going to pay the cost ??

The sudden demise of a soul ,

Short term mourning by governmental roles….

Who is going to handle the situation as a whole !!!

We all are one ,

Waking up with that rising sun ,

Plz spare a moment to think ,

Before you hold that thoughtless gun….

We all are same , with different religions ..

We send you a message of peace , with this pegion…

Every religion propogates the foremost religion of humanity .

Get up from this brutal state of insanity ..

Violence against any caste , country or community .

Will never provide you with any immunity. .

Think about the pain of their mourning parents , siblings , spouse or kids ..

I bet you won’t be able to uplift your eyelids….

We all stand here together

Against terrorism

With a crystal clear vision…

I feel ,

Terrorists are dead inside ,

They just need some place to hide ,

They have lost the path of god as their ultimate guide …
_© Muneeta Aneja

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82 Comments Add yours

  1. Thank you for such beautiful poetry!

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much for reading and appreciating ..This really means a lot ..God bless ❣️

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      1. Nilzeitung says:

        We send you a (((((> (Message of peace, with this .and all the symbols..your soul, have got their paradise place.love god knows it, the other not !!!) <)))))
        Many Thanks !! I can imagine, (!) arrived at her message !! I am also very sad!!!!
        Thanks a lot !!!!!!!

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  2. Thank you for speaking such bold truth to power! God bless you!

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , Your compliment has really empowered me to the core …Thankyou so much ..God bless…✨✨

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  3. writtencasey says:

    Words of power and earnestness. Glad you made and shared.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much for reading and appreciating ….God bless you dear ❣️

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  4. JanBeek says:

    Such heartfelt thoughts. I totally concur. You have expressed these sentiments so precisely. They speak to my inner voice, too.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , Thankyou so much ..This really means a lot to me…A compliment from your side always uplifts me higher….God bless ✨❣️

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  5. anitashope says:

    Heartfelt words. The saddest part is that we have terrorism at all. We are all created by God…we are all His children.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you Anita jee , I totally agree with your words …And thankyou so much for reading and understanding its essence ..This means a lot …✨✨

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  6. Very powerful, deep words. Terrorists are not on a path to God they are walking straight to hell they show no remorse for another. Life changes all too quickly in this world and not in a good way. All belief systems as you say lead to God and respect this we should. It is not the religion which is wrong it is the person and they hide behind their false mask. Bless you.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , I absolutely agree with each and every word you said and thankyou so much for supporting my words too ..They mean a world to me …God bless you ✨❣️

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  7. BeingAlive says:

    That’s profoundly beautiful 👍🏻🌹

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much…Means a lot to me ..God bless ✨✨

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      1. BeingAlive says:

        God bless u too🌹

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  8. Powerfully said! And yes they have lost the path of God.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much for reading and understanding the power behind the cause of writing that ….This means a world to me…One can only be such brutal , when they have the lost their godly path

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      1. Yes, for sure! Peace and many blessings to you.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much for appreciating …God bless ✨❣️

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  10. Thought for Change says:

    Such a wonderful message. All religion teaches peace but sometimes they ends up fighting saying it’s for peace.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Heyyy Adithya , You are absolutely right dear …Thankyou so much for reading and sharing your deep and crystal clear views…Means a lot to me ✨

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  11. Madhusudan says:

    Beautiful poetry.👌👌👌

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much ..I am really glad you liked it …plz keep on guiding me further too ✨

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  12. Beautiful and heart touching. We are all one. We must do to others as we like others to do to us.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , Thankyou so much for sparing your precious time and sharing your views..This means a lot to me and I totally agree with what you said …✨✨

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      1. Thank you for liking my comment.

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  13. My Deaf Mind says:

    That’s the hope for everyone to be kind to one another. Thank you 🙂 Cheers and peace to you.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , Thankyou so much for your constant support always ..that’s really kind and hunble of you ..Means a lot to me ✨

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      1. My Deaf Mind says:

        You are very welcome 🙂 and thank you too 🙂

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  14. A powerful jolting reminder of what really matters.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , First of all I really like your admin name : Thinking listener …Speaks to me about your sharp observation , deep analysis and listening skills…Thankyou so much for understanding the message in it ..Means a lot to me… plz keep in guiding me further too ✨

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much Sushma jee…Means a lot to me ✨

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      1. sushma555 says:

        Pleasure is all mine ji😊

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  15. A deep insight shows the change that needs to take place!

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Exactly …Thankyou so much for reading and understanding the depth of it ..God bless you ..Plz keep on sharing your guidance further too ✨

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  16. Curving Within says:

    Beautifully penned with such a subtle message!

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much …I am really humbled that you understood the real crux and essence of it …God bless…Plz keep on guiding me further too ✨

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  17. iScriblr says:

    Very powerful, deep words! Thank you for your courage!❤

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Hey Richa , Thankyou so much for your appreciation and constant support dear …God bless ❣️

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  18. Great message in the poem, great powerful share my friend

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much …I am really glad you found it powerful ….This means a lot to me …✨

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      1. My pleasure always dear 🌻

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  19. The ending sums it up! Nicely written!

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , Thankyou so much . I am really glad you liked it .. Your support always uplifts me higher and means a lot to me .God bless ✨

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      1. You’re very welcome!

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  20. Muneeta, this is a very very deep but true based upon reality. Yes, indeed we all are the same. I have seen here in the USA a few months ago a very handsome guy was dead within a few minutes because someone wants him to go back to his ” country”. Having a brown skin was an issue for another fellow so he killed that innocent soul. I wish those terrors could think once and could read your post. Hats off to your writing.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      That’s really sad …And I really feel sad when I hear such incidents of terrorism …Therefore I have written this ..Thankyou so much for understanding it ..This means a lot to me …✨✨ And I am visiting your blog right now …❣️

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  21. It’s been a while since you visited me, don’t disappear. Where have you been girlfriend? Stay blessed and stay connected!

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      I missed you a lot and lot….I was just a bit inactive on WordPress , but I did it now ✨❣️😊😘….

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      1. I missed you as well, thank you and heads up for you , you are going to add another award in your collection tomorrow. I went to check your site to list you and I saw you already was awarded with this award. Muneeta you are my great supporter and a great blogging friend! Stay blessed and please stay connected.

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  22. Muneeta I have nominated you for “The Versatile Blogger Award’ Please come, check out my today’s post. You don’t have that award in your collection dear friend. Take care and sending you tons of hugs.

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  23. A very deep and powerful poem
    Love this !

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  24. I hope you are doing great. It’s been a while so I thought I should check on you. Take care, when you get a chance drop me a line please. Stay blessed and stay connected.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , I really missed you …I was thinking of connecting with you in between ..How are you ?? I’ll catch all your blogposts asap ….✨❣️

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  25. inhiscare753 says:

    Beautifully written 💜

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much ..this means a lot to me ✨❣️

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      1. Poetgeneral says:

        You’re Most welcome. You write beautifully.

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      2. innervoice28 says:

        You are so generous and humble to gift me that compliment ..God bless

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      This is so beautiful …loved it ✨❣️

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  26. Aww !! What a heartfelt stufff….. really interesting & beautiful.

    Nice photograph
    Keep sharing

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much ..I am really glad you liked it .Means a lot ..Plz keep on guiding me further too .

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      1. Sure….
        The pleasure all is mine

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  27. Your poem touches me deeply…I loved it! God bless you, my sister!

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much ..This really means a lot to me. God bless you and you are really kind and humble …

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  28. You have a beautiful soul, and it certainly is reflective in your heartfelt words… Keep up the treasured works
    !

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much ..This compliment means a world to me ..Plz keep on guiding me further too ..God bless 💞

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