Rise like a SUN !!!

I am the daughter of your fire ,

I admire , you inspire ….

I am the son of your wrath ,

O’ Sun , shine your rays , to light up my path …

Darkness is your biggest rebel ,

Erode it away , to make us able …

You are bold ,

You are fierce ,

You are Powerful !!

Your reflections , make our lives colourful ….

A light for the homeless ,

A saviour through nights of coldness,

A legacy of survival ,

Your existence is so vital ….

Endless and bright is your energy ,

Get your mind and soul into a perfect synergy ….

O’ Sun , We await your arrival ,

Coz , we are the child of Sun ,

We are the RIVALS ….

We are the RIVALS ….

When your soul feels dark , like a lone sunset ,

My dear , Pick yourself up , Don’t you get upset …

This is the sign of new beginnings..

The wheels have started spinning ,

Don’t you dare consider this , a sad ending !!!

This is just a temporary feeling …

Coz , The sun rises again ,

Brighter and Brighter ,

With the fury flames ,

Burning themselves up !!

And so will you ,

Rise like a SUN !!!
_©Muneeta Aneja

https://www.instagram.com/ms.journo_/

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91 Comments Add yours

  1. Love it! Very encouraging! God bless!

    Liked by 4 people

    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much . I am really glad you liked it .. Your compliments light up my day … Have a great day ahead …

      Liked by 4 people

  2. JanBeek says:

    Great opening lines. You drew me in with “I am the daughter of your fire ,
    I admire , you inspire ….”
    Contrast of darkness kept me reading. Emergence of light gave me hope. Happy Sunday! Thank you for the thoughtful writing. I’ll be back!

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , thankyou so much..Your precise observation really means a lot to me ..I am really glad you liked it .. Plz keep on guiding me further too ………

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Me too .Thankyou so much for stopping by dear …

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  3. Jim says:

    sweet. wow! look at those eyes.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much.. That’s really kind of you and I am totally humbled by your kind compliments and sweet gestures ..Have a great day ahead ..

      Liked by 1 person

  4. Tanya says:

    Encouraging and so inspiring, I enjoyed the nature imagery you used! Beautiful as always!

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Hello Tanya , How are you ? Thankyou so much dear ..I am really glad you liked it .Your compliments mean a lot to me …

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Tanya says:

        I am fine, thanks. How are you doing? Well my pleasure 🙂

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  5. iScriblr says:

    As beautiful as you! Wonderfully penned!❤

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you Richa , Thankyou so much .That;s really sweet of you and I am blushed and humbled at the same time ..lots of love .
      Muneeta

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , Thankyou so much …I am really glad you liked it ❣️✨

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      1. You’re welcome 😊

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  6. I love the adjectives your provided in this.
    Especially the first 4 lines

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much ….I am really glad you liked it ….Have a nice day ahead …And plz keep on guiding me further too ✨✨🍃

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  7. The beauty of your worlds that invades darkness…your beauty shines through…your eyes reflects the passion! you are beautiful and you use your talent to share that which is hopeful

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you ,
      Thankyou so much …I have been following your blog and all of your blogposts , share an inner voice and uplifting light….So , these compliments really mean a world to me ….And thankyou so much for your precise observation and kind compliments ..I am totally humbled …Maybe I am too small to say , but all my best wishes and blessings to you , across the rivers ..
      Regards
      Muneeta

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      1. Muneeta, I receive your warm wishes with open arms…I cherish them and return them, hoping they find you doing well. I am honored to share the task of encouragement and inspiration with someone of your ability and skills…
        poetically yours with sincerity

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  8. Lovely dear, you are an excellent thinker. Rise like a Sun After your each fall. is the line my youngest daughter told in her nursery fancy dress competition where she dressed as Sun.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , Thankyou so much ..I am so glad you shared a heart warming experience with me and somewhere this resonated with you ….Plz keep on guiding me further too ✨✨❣️❣️❣️❣️ And your blog is wonderful 🍃

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much .. This really means a lot to me ✨✨✨

      Liked by 1 person

  9. Loved it the power of the Sun it flows and reawakens the soul, body and mind. We have to learn to work with the Fire and is a powerful energy which can be harnessed but care is required as it can easily burn out and then needs to be rekindled once again.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , Thankyou so much for your compliments and I am really glad you liked it and I totally agree with your point of view and this adds a whole new light to my subject of poem , so loved it 🍃✨❣️❣️ Have a great day ahead

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thanks a ton .Your kind gesture made my day .

      Liked by 1 person

      1. My pleasure keep being awesome

        Like

    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much …Plz keep on guiding me further too ❣️🍃✨

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Thank you to like my posts … you are welcome …Yeah I’ll try to guide you … you too help me with writing better…

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      2. By the way if it’s you in dp then you are beautiful

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      3. innervoice28 says:

        Haha ..Thankyou so much dear ..That’s me ..Means a lot to me ..You are kind and you look graceful and beautiful too dear ❣️ God bless

        Liked by 1 person

  10. Orvillewrong says:

    A powerful and inspiring piece!

    Liked by 3 people

    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you ,Thankyou so much for your kind compliments .I am totally humbled and it means a lot to me ..

      Liked by 2 people

  11. Orvillewrong says:

    It is I who am humbled by the beauty of your words!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much …..✨💓Plz keep on guiding me further too

      Liked by 1 person

  12. Sara Garg says:

    Great lines…love it

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you Sara , Thankyou so much for reading and appreciating ..Means a lot to me ❣️✨🍃

      Like

  13. sweekritij says:

    Positive vibes reached successfully!👍

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , Thankyou so much ….I am really glad you liked it….Means a world to me ..Plz keep on guiding me further too ✨❣️🍃

      Like

      1. sweekritij says:

        Sure mam!👍I can understand what these compliments mean.If possible,do visit my page!😅

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  14. Muneeta, I love your new site. It’s incredibly beautiful. You are so smart. And the poem is simply marvellous!

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , Missed you a lot …..I wanted to ask you , How’s my new theme looking and suggest me any changes too , if you think it’s not clear anywhere ….I am so humbled by your kind compliments and grace always …I am really grateful and blessed to be associated with you , this way ❣️❣️❣️Thankyou so much

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      1. I am grateful to have you as a friend

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  15. I love your picture as well. I love the theme.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much …..This means a world to me ✨✨🍃

      Liked by 1 person

  16. Lovely powerful poem and wonderful clicks 💐

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much….I am really humbled by your kind compliments ..And thankyou so much for your precious time ✨✨🍃🍃

      Like

    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much dear ✨❣️🍃

      Like

  17. Beautiful penned with cute pic.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much …I am really humbled ..Means a lot ✨❣️😊

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  18. Such a compass of love, light, and hope.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much for your precious time and even more precious compliments ..They have made my day ..Warm wishes and blessings on your way ✨❣️ Plz keep on guiding me further too

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Awww, I’m glad I could warm your day with a little extra sunshine! 🙂

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  19. johncoyote says:

    Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
    Amazing poetry by a talented writer.

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  20. johncoyote says:

    I loved the poetry. Honest and good words shared.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , Thankyou so much ..That’s really kind of you and I am totally humbled by your compliment …✨✨Thankyou so much for the reblog tooo…That made my day bright 🍃

      Liked by 1 person

      1. johncoyote says:

        I’m glad. I liked your integram site. You look like, you have a wonderful life. I wish I could travel and see new things. You are welcome.

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      2. innervoice28 says:

        Warm greetings to you , Thankyou so much for your precise observation and that compliment on my profile was really very beautiful and heart touching …I saw your profile too and I can see the tales of experience and wisdom on it ….I am too small to say this , but , May god bless you and endow you with good health , happiness and prosperity ……

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      3. johncoyote says:

        Thank you dear Poet. I wish you great success and happiness.

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  21. sriharshinee says:

    So beautiful ❤❤✨

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , Thankyou so much ✨✨✨

      Like

  22. Reblogged this on Success Inspirers' World and commented:
    Very lovely.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much for your constant wonderful support ..I am really grateful towards you …

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      1. I appreciate your kind words of appreciation.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much for your immense support .This means a world to me .Plz keep on guiding me further too.

      Like

  23. writtencasey says:

    Beautifully feminine yet highly powerful. Cheers. So glad you made and shared.

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much for your kind compliments . This really means a lot to me .I am glad you liked it …

      Like

  24. Well done! I have nominated you for The Light of the World Award. Follow this link and get the details.
    https://yoursuccessinspirer.com/2018/10/14/light-of-the-world-award/

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much …This really means a world to me ✨✨✨

      Like

  25. That was very powerful and strong,i respect your words to approach so much,

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much….This really means a lot to me…..I am totally humbled and kindly keep on guiding me further too ✨✨✨

      Like

  26. Motivational and so much energy yes, we all shall rise and discover ourselves

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Warm greetings to you , Thankyou so much ….Your compliment means a lot to me..I am totally humbled….Thankyou so so much for your all time awesome support ✨✨❣️

      Like

  27. Madhusudan says:

    Inspiring poetry….very beautiful composition.👌👌

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    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much for your constant support ..That’s really kind and humble of you ..God bless ✨

      Liked by 1 person

  28. Rabindranath Pradhan says:

    A beautiful garland of words.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. innervoice28 says:

      Thankyou so much ..This means a lot to me ✨✨

      Liked by 1 person

  29. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    LIGHT AND DARK—HERE SPARK!

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